Feedback on Star Transformation Task and Music Video Director task

1. Star Transformation Task

Some of your work does not draw enough on the music videos themselves. Yes, you can use articles and other media texts but remember that we are exploring Goodwin's point on Star Text.

You also need to be a little more analytical - please read carefully the last section of this article on Rihanna. It is detailed and analytical.

Good Girls Gone Bad - Women in music videos

2. Music Video Director research

Again, a bit too vague and not enough analysis of their signature style - This is to be supported by lots of screenshots, although I have enjoyed the embedded documentaries.

You should all check each other's work!

Please improve your posts.